英语应用文写作之留学申请信(Application for Admittance)

charlotte 发表于 2005-5-4 08:32:00

留学和奖学金申请信中须写明下列几点： 
 
(1)写明申请学校和所学专业。 
 
(2)提供申请人的个人资历。 
 
(3)索取申请学校相关的申请表等。 
 
留学申请信 
 
【例一】 
 
Post Office Box 2418 
 
Branch 28-5 
 
Post Code 100081 
 
Beijing, P.R.C. 
 
November 12, 1997 
 
The Registrar of Admission 
 
The Graduate School of 
 
the Pennsylvania State University 
 
U.S.A. 16802 
 
Dear Sir: 
 
I am deeply interested in your graduate school in the Department of MechanicalEngineering, and plan to apply for admission for the fall of 1998. My GPA in the university was 3.5, and I plan to take TOEFL and GRE in October and December, 1997, respectively. 
 
Please send catalog and application forms to me. I shall be greatly appreciated. 
 
Very truly yours, 
 
Wang Yang 
 
【例二】 
 
Department of Applied Physics 
 
Tsinghua University, 100084 
 
Beijing, China 
 
Sept. 11th, 1999 
 
RE: Applying for Admittance 
 
Office of Graduate Admissions 
 
Boston University 
 
Massachusetts, U.S.A. 
 
Dear Sir, 
 
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university. 
 
My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Tsinghua University(China). Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my BS degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field under the instructions of first?class professors and in a dynamic academic atmosphere. I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study. 
 
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, a detailed introduction to the School of Physics, and other relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter. 
 
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 
 
Sincerely yours, 
 
Li Jin 
 
【例三】 
 
English College 
 
Beijing Foreign Language University 
 
Beijing 100083 
 
P.R. China 
 
June 16, 1999 
 
Office of Admission 
 
Huntington University 
 
Dear Sir, 
 
Thank you for your letter and the application forms. Enclosed you will find the completed forms and three checks (80 dollars) for the application fee and the first month?s rent for dormitory. The additional 5 dollars will be deposited at your college. I shall appreciate any favorable action you might take in admitting me to your college for the spring semester of 1998. I am most anxious to hear from you soon. 
 
Sincerely yours， 
 
Zhao Pengfei 
 
【例四】 
 
Department of Finance and Econmics 
 
Shanghai Jiaotong University 
 
Shanghai 200043 
 
May 1, 1999 
 
Graduate School 
 
Oxford University 
 
London 
 
Dear Sir: 
 
Thank you for your email and kind offer! Definitely, I would like to try to apply for a visa for the winter quarter. I understand that both you and Professor Black have tried very hard to help me with my situation and I appreciate your efforts. 
 
As it is true that nobody really knows why the visa officers refuse certain applicants and allow others, I have been told by several successful visa reapplicants that reapplying with a new I?20 with a slightly different offer from the US schools would help. For example, a slight increase in financial aid and so on. I don't know whether this is something possible for you to consider for my situation. But I would really appreciate if you could consider some possibilities. I know that I have given you enough trouble and please ignore my request if it is too difficult for you to do. I will simply try my best to get my visa and come to your school. 
 
Thanks! 
 
Sincerely yours, 
 
Liu Liping 
 
【例五】 
 
Department of Electronics 
 
Tianjing University 
 
Tianjing 300005 
 
P.R.China 
 
April 3, 1998 
 
Graduate School 
 
University of Alberta 
 
Edmonton, Alberta 
 
Canada 
 
Dear Sir, 
 
Enclosed is my completed application form. I have also requested all my credenti? als to be forwarded to you. They should reach you shortly. I would like to assure you of my deep intention to attend your Undergraduate School of Business Administration for the spring semester of 1989. I sincerely hope that you will process my application and expedite my papers at your earliest convenience. 
 
Sincerely yours， 
 
Feng Jiming 
 
【例六】 
 
Communication Department 
 
Fudan University 
 
Shanghai 200056 
 
P.R.China 
 
March 23, 2001 
 
Graduate School 
 
University of Toronto 
 
Toronto, Ontario 
 
Dear Sir, 
 
I have just received from your office an application form and information for international students. However, I have completed and submitted the same form and paid the $25 admission/evaluation fee before. 
 
Would you please tell me if my application and fee have reached you or if the recent materials were sent to me by mistake? 
 
Thanks for your assistance. 
 
Yours sincerely, 
 
Luan Jinfu 
 
【例七】 
 
Department of Computer 
 
Beijing University 
 
Beijing 100087 
 
P.R. China 
 
1st May, 2000 
 
Office of Admission 
 
University of Auckland 
 
Private Bag Auckland 
 
New Zealand 
 
Dear Sir, 
 
I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Beijing University in June next year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your university next fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree. 
 
I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance. 
 
Sincerely yours， 
 
Wang Feng 
 
【例八】 
 
Department of Applied Mathematics 
 
Wuhan University 
 
Wuhan 430000 
 
P.R. China 
 
March 16, 1999 
 
Office of Foreign Admission 
 
University of Waterloo 
 
Waterloo, Ontario 
 
Canada 
 
Dear Admission Officer: 
 
I am ×××, the Chinese applicant who desires to pursue my Ph.D. study in your honored program. 
 
I am very sorry to inform you that I presently cannot afford the application fee you demand because of the following reasons: 
 
1?The high foreign currency exchange rate, US$1 = 8.9 RMB; 
 
2.My relative low monthly income, about 200 RMB (equal to only $22); 
 
3.The extremely strict limitation in China to obtain foreign currency, esp. U.S. Dollar in near future. According to current foreign currency regulation, only citizens who get visa can have at most $2,000 exchanged. 
 
I got excellent scores on TOEFL (63/62/67, total: 640, May, 1998) and GRE (V: 700, Q: 800, A: 800, total: 2,300, Nov. 5th, 1998). My graduate GPA is 3.7. I sincerely hope you can consider my situation and review my application first. 
 
Thanks a lot. Your kindness is greatly appreciated. 
 
Yours truly， 
 
Fang Lin 
 
【例九】 
 
Department of Chemical Engineering 
 
Tsinghua University 
 
Beijing 100084 
 
China 
 
Jan. 6, 1994 
 
Office of Foreign Admission 
 
University of Birmingham 
 
P.O. Box 363 
 
Birmingham B152TT 
 
U.K.? 
 
Dear Sir: 
 
I wish to pursue a doctoral degree in Chemical Engineering at your institution. My desired date of entrance is fall, 1994. Please send me necessary application forms at your early convenience. 
 
If possible, I also wish to obtain a graduate assistantship so that I may support myself and obtain more practical experience while pursuing graduate study. 
 
I obtained my B. E. (Chemical Engineering) in 1989 and M. S. (Chemical Engineering) in 1992 from Tsinghua University. At present, I work as a teacher at the same university. 
 
I have taken the TOEFL and received a score of 607. I am going to take GRE this coming October. 
 
Would you please send me the application forms for admission and financial support? Thank you very much. 
 
Sincerely yours, 
 
Henry Yu

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英语应用文写作之留学申请信(Application for Admittance)