水竹人 发表于 2007-4-28 14:13:44

牵手在篱笆古道

一盏离愁孤单伫立在窗口 我在门后假装你人还没走

All alone in wait by the windo。Stands a sad lamp in parting sorrow.
To linger behind an unbelieving gate.Isn't my long gaze all but too late.

就地如重游月圆更寂寞 夜半清醒的烛火不忍苛责我

Lonelier is the moon full and cold. Bitter still when an old love retold.
A mindnight candle struggles to keep awake.Isn't a sleepless grief all but my mistake.

一壶漂泊浪迹天涯难入喉 你走之后酒暖回忆思念瘦

To the end of the world I drift. With a pot of wine too heavy to lift.
The wine revives a memory thin and thick.Doesn't it warm up all but a heart so love-sick.

水向东流时间怎么偷 花开就一次成熟我却错过

How can I bear to steal the hour.As water flows east to catch a flower.
Soon blooming,soon withering,and so forgotten.Didn't my life miss all but an age innocent.

谁在用琵琶弹奏一曲东风破 岁月在墙上剥落看见小时候

Who played upon alute amid east breezes.Heart torn apart and tune falling into pieces.
A weary wall stands peeling and silent.Doesn't it remind all but an age innocent.

犹记得那年我们都还很年幼 而如今琴声悠悠我的等候你没听过

Youthful hours are no more and passed。Am I alone holding to by-gones fast.
In wain is the music blown to float. Isn't my wait all but a sobbing note.

谁在用琵琶弹奏一曲东风破 枫叶讲故事染色结局我看透

Never could the same lute ever play.A tune long gone and blown far away.
Maples live for a moment bright and brief.Woulden't our story come to all but a grief.

篱笆外的古道我牵着你走过 荒烟蔓草的念头就连分手都很沉默

Beyond hedges an ancient path forgot the time.When we walked along with your hand in mine.
Parting words speak less than a silent tear.Isn't memory all but smoky grass far and near.


其实《东风破》是曲牌名,原词是苏轼所作:

一盏离愁 孤单窗前自鬓头   
奄奄门后 人未走   
月圆寂寞 旧地重游   
夜半清醒泪 烛火空留   
一壶漂泊浪迹天涯难入喉   
君去后 酒暖思谁瘦   
水向东流 三春如梦向谁偷   
花开却错 谁家琵琶东风破   
岁月流离 不解时候   
仍记总角幼   
琴幽幽 人幽幽   
琵琶一曲东风破   
枫染红尘谁看透   
篱笆古道曾走   
荒烟漫草年头   
分飞后
找一个人——牵手黄昏后,牵手篱笆古道


★我喜欢找一条长满古树的小路慢慢的走;
   走过斑斑驳驳的树阴的时候,就像走过了心中的明暗悲喜………

我在睡梦中 发表于 2007-4-28 15:22:27

走过斑斑驳驳的树阴的时候,就像走过了心中的明暗悲喜………

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水竹人 发表于 2007-4-28 20:56:57

谢谢村长这么支持
以后我会很努力的:loveliness:

Jarvis 发表于 2007-4-28 21:01:59

看到英语我头就晕了。。

我在睡梦中 发表于 2007-4-28 21:03:43

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