that~~just you（我改~）
本帖最后由 JaceeBlack 于 2010-7-27 01:15 编辑When you kissed me at the corner, you told me you have loved me so much. But my dearest Mr. I could not answer youlike what you had wanted.You said ’I love you until my last breath.’I said’ you are my king.'You said’ you are just my Queen. I only belong to your, my heart and soul.'I told you ’kiss me, right now’Then I went away.(这句不会改，貌似有错)You did really hard, and wanted to catch me until you lost your last breath.
‘Love me until your last breath. ’You did like what your have promised, you —just my King.You asked me ’so my dear, do you like my Lord? If you want, I will give all my things to you including my life.’I never thought about you would pass away，But at last I captured your life in that way you think that can take your heart and love away.you leaved me……Your kingdom——If I can, I would rather to change it formy majesty, even if it need my life .You are my King always, my dearest Mr.my heart and soul all belong to you. I miss you so much, how can you abandon me? So now can you feeling my feelings? 原来全都过去了啊~
路过.. 围观，不解释。。。。:m32
配乐：北风那个吹呀，雪花那个飘呀~~~ 虽然我英语水平很好,不过还是不看了 这样的时态使用，这样的语法，这样的拼写，看得人真是风中凌乱啊~~~~ 回复 4# 曉輪回
你就算看了也看不懂 回复 5# 银英
学姐/长，您就忍忍吧哈~:P 回复 7# JaceeBlack
能好好说话吗？ 回复 6# SUN
不要酱紫打击他吗~ 回复曉輪回
你就算看了也看不懂
SUN 发表于 2010-7-27 00:51 http://www.chengyi.org/bbs/images/common/back.gif
当水平差不多的人出来的英文,我有把握看懂 回复SUN
不要酱紫打击他吗~
JaceeBlack 发表于 2010-7-27 00:54 http://www.chengyi.org/bbs/images/common/back.gif
显然你会错意。那位回帖的人要打击的是你。 回复 8# 银英
？？？您的性别保密那我改叫您学姐还是学长啊？我很困惑 回复 11# 黄瓜
好吧 我领悟能力差~ 哎 回复银英
？？？您的性别保密那我改叫您学姐还是学长啊？我很困惑
JaceeBlack 发表于 2010-7-27 00:57 http://www.chengyi.org/bbs/images/common/back.gif
你理解力偏差了。我说的好好说话是指你的原帖。 时态语法拼写真是让人风中凌乱。 回复 14# 银英
哦~多谢指教！我英语作文不好~这是我看《年轻的维多利亚》里面的对白写的