that~~just you（我改~）

JaceeBlack

When you kissed me at the corner, you told me you have loved me so much. But my dearest Mr. I could not answer you

like what you had wanted.

You said ’I love you until my last breath.’

I said’ you are my king.'

You said’ you are just my Queen. I only belong to your, my

heart and soul.'

I told you ’kiss me, right now’

Then I went away.(这句不会改，貌似有错)

You did really hard, and wanted to catch me until you lost

your last breath.

‘Love me until your last breath. ’

You did like what your have promised, you —just my King.

You asked me ’so my dear, do you like my Lord? If you want, I will give all my things to you including my life.’

I never thought about you would pass away，But at last I captured your life in that way you think that can take your heart and love away.you leaved me……

Your kingdom——If I can, I would rather to change it for

my majesty, even if it need my life .

You are my King always, my dearest Mr.  my heart and soul all belong to you. I miss you so much, how can you abandon me? So now can you feeling my feelings?

SUN

原来全都过去了啊~

路过..

米雪陛下

围观，不解释。。。。:m32

配乐：北风那个吹呀，雪花那个飘呀~~~

曉輪回

虽然我英语水平很好,不过还是不看了

银英

这样的时态使用，这样的语法，这样的拼写，看得人真是风中凌乱啊~~~~

SUN

回复 4# 曉輪回


    你就算看了也看不懂

JaceeBlack

回复 5# 银英


    学姐/长，您就忍忍吧哈~:P

银英

回复 7# JaceeBlack


    能好好说话吗？

JaceeBlack

回复 6# SUN


    不要酱紫打击他吗~

曉輪回

回复  曉輪回


    你就算看了也看不懂
SUN 发表于 2010-7-27 00:51

    当水平差不多的人出来的英文,我有把握看懂

黄瓜

回复  SUN


    不要酱紫打击他吗~
JaceeBlack 发表于 2010-7-27 00:54

    显然你会错意。那位回帖的人要打击的是你。

JaceeBlack

回复 8# 银英


    ？？？您的性别保密那我改叫您学姐还是学长啊？我很困惑

JaceeBlack

回复 11# 黄瓜


    好吧 我领悟能力差~ 哎

银英

回复  银英


    ？？？您的性别保密那我改叫您学姐还是学长啊？我很困惑
JaceeBlack 发表于 2010-7-27 00:57

你理解力偏差了。我说的好好说话是指你的原帖。 时态语法拼写真是让人风中凌乱。

JaceeBlack

回复 14# 银英


    哦~多谢指教！我英语作文不好~这是我看《年轻的维多利亚》里面的对白写的