十句作文法

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十句作文法是由有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后
便可
较大幅度地提高成绩。为此有必要向考生加以介绍，目的是使一些对作文没有把握的?
生找
到一条可行的解决办法。(参考：蔡基刚《英语考试高分作文》)
    需要指出的是所谓十句作文并非一定10句，从很多考生的高分(200词以下)来分析，
句
子数量在8句至12句(依句子长短和结构不同而不同)。如以每个句子平均10—15个单词计

算，便能用8—12个句子完成一篇要求120—150字的作文。
  其基本模式为：
　　　　┌─主题句  句 1
第一段─┤
　开头　└─扩展句  句 2
　　　　┌─主题句  句 1
第一段─┤
　正文　├─扩展句  句 2
        ├─扩展句  句 3
        ├─扩展句  句 4
        ├─扩展句  句 5
        ├─扩展句  句 6
        ├─扩展句  句 7
        ├─扩展句  句 8
        └─扩展句  句 9
第三段   ──结尾句  句10
结尾
    第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，必须提出，通过问题点明全文主题；
第二句为
扩展句，须进一步说明和支持主题句。或是将关系倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句
提出
问题。
    第二段为正文，共七句。第一句(句3)为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的
主题
相关和一致。第二句至第七句(句4一句7)为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之
间要
注意运用好过渡使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。
    第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句，它将前面内容总结为一结果，表
明自己的
论点。
    三段之间的连接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的连接过渡手段。例如：
Example 1
                                     Television
      Television presents a vivid world in front of us. (1)(主题句)Through T
V, we
can learn what is happening half way across the world. (2)(扩展句)
      Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.
(3)
(主题句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many y
oung
men who can not go to formal universities. (4)(扩展句) For another, children
can
broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The A
nimal
World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". (5)(扩展句) Besides, women c
an
learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fru
it
cakes. (6)(扩展句) Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies fr
om TV
programs such as computer and telecommunication. (7)(扩展句) And also we can
learn
singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training co
urses.
(8)(扩展句) In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more a
nd more
obvious. (9)(扩展句)
     Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program prod
uced, I
believe that our life will become even more significant. (10)(总结句) (全文共
165个
词)
Example 2
                             Changes in People's Diet
     There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. (1)(主
题句)
For example, grain, the main food of most people in China, is now playing a
less
important role, while the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk, m
eat
has increased. (2) (扩展句)
     The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. (3) (主
题句)
First,people are much wealthier than before. (4) (扩展句) With a higher inco
me,
they can afford to buy good foods which, in the past, were rarely seen on th
e dinner
tables of ordinary families. (5) (扩展句) Another factor is that people have
realized
the importance of a balanced diet to their health. (6) (扩展句) Lack of cert
ain amount
of meat or milk, for example, will result in poor health. (7) (扩展句) Final
ly, owing
to the economic reform, meat and milk,which were scarce in the past, are pro
duced in
large quantities. (8) (扩展句) For all those reasons, what was formerly call
ed "the
basket of vegetables" has become that of varied foods. (9) (扩展句)
     To sum up, insignificant as those changes may seem, they are the signs
of the
improved economic condition in China, and we believe that as the effort in t
he
modernization movement continues, there will be greater changes in people's
diet in
the future. (10) (总结句) (全文共195个词)
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